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PostSubject: Burned #1 Script Preview!   Fri Mar 20, 2009 4:01 pm

Burned
Issue 1

Page 1
4 Panels

P1.

Panoramic shot of the Superstition Mountains near Phoenix, AZ. (images can be found at: http://www.fetlerart.com/images/Coyote.jpg)

Cap: THE SUPERSTITION MOUNTAIN. JUST OUTSIDE OF PHOENIX, ARIZONA. 24 HOURS AGO.

P2.

Close up of a young teenage girl being shot in the head.

Cap:
IS IT SAFE YET?

P3.

Scene now of several men dressed in all black firing machine guns.

P4.

The final scene of the page is of teenage bodies lying on the ground, dead from several gunshot wounds.

Cap:
NO. NO IT ISN'T SAFE AT ALL.

Page 2
5 Panels

P1.

Panoramic shot of the Phoenix Police Department.

Cap:
PHOENIX, ARIZONA. NOW.

P2.

We see the inside of the precinct now, with officers doing their job. Two officers stand in the background speaking. One is a black woman who is very sexy and sports an afro (Ray Anne Hansel), the other is a white man who is tall and well built, with slicked back, black hair and and clean shaven face (Matthew Anderson). They seem to be arguing.

Ray Anne:
THIS IS BULLSHIT! IT'S NOT EVEN OUR COUNTY!

Matthew:
COUNTY? COUNTY!? WHO DO YOU WORK FOR, ROSCOE P. COLTRANE!? YOU'LL DO THE CASES ASSIGNED TO YOU HANSEL! PERIOD!

P3. Close up shot of Ray Anne, very angry.

Ray Anne: OH FUCK YOU, MATT! JUST BECAUSE YOU'RE CAPTAIN OF YOUR SHITTY "FORCEFED" UNIT NOW, DOESN'T MEAN YOUR BALLS ARE ANY BIGGER!

Matthew:
MY BALLS MAY BE SMALL, BUT YOU'VE NEVER COMPLAINED.

Ray Anne: I WAS DRUNK.

P4. Close up shot of Matthew now arguing with Ray Anne.

Matthew: WHATEVER. THE POINT IS YOU'RE ASSIGNED TO THE KILLINGS FROM LAST NIGHT.

Ray Anne:
I DON'T SEE THE POINT. THEY AREN'T THE FIRST PEOPLE TO DIE UP ON THAT MOUNTAIN.

P5. Close up shot of Ray Anne, who has a look of disappointment on her face.

Matthew: THEY WEREN'T SOME FUCKED UP TWEAKERS. THEY WERE TEENAGE KIDS.

Ray Anne: KIDS?

Matthew: YEAH.

Ray Anne: DAMN.

Page 3
4 Panels

P1.

Shot of Ray Anne driving down a busy street in downtown Phoenix.

P2.

We now see Kelly, a young white man who is slightly overweight and sports a green mohawk and several facial piercings. Kelly is running down the sidewalk knocking other people out of his way. behind him are men in all black suits chasing him.

Kelly: OH GOD! OHGODOHGODOHGODOHGOD!

P3.

This is a bird's eye view of Ray Anne's car turning at an intersection.

P4.

Ray Anne's car hits Kelly. His back slams into the windshield, cracking it in hundreds of places. The men in black suits can be seen in the background standing still, with a look of surprise on their faces.

Page 4
5 Panels

P1. Ray Anne steps out of the car.

Ray Anne: OH MY GOD!

P2. We now see Ray Anne standing next to the front of the car. Kelly lays on top of the hood facing up. Lots of people are now stopping their vehicles and the sidewalks are beginning to become crowded with onlookers. Ray Anne is holding up her badge and yelling to the crowd.

Ray Anne: IT'S OK, I'M A POLICE OFFICER. SOMEONE CALL 911.

P3.

Kelly now rolls over onto his side and moans.

Kelly: UHH...WHAT THE...WHAT HAPPENED?

P4.

The men in black suits all look at each other with anger and determination on their faces.

P5.

Close up of Kelly, who has a look of fear and surprise on his face.

Kelly: OH SHIT.

Page 5
Splash Page

We see the men in suits with guns drawn (preferably something simple like 9 mm's.) running toward Kelly, who is now off of the hood of the car and has grabbed Ray Anne by the wrist and is running with her (toward the reader).

Kelly:
RUN!

Credits for the book go on this page:

"Perfect Strangers"
Story And Art by Craig DeBoard


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